I don't think the vocals are "gay" ;-) I think they are good. I had to check if the subwoofer is on, because there wasn't much lowend... or my sub is still not on. The song could, maybe, use a little more contrast between the parts of the arrangement - especially the ending just kinda drops off - but the voice sample is nice.. do you know what the voice says? All in all: thumbs up! If she doesn't appreciate that, than it wasn't your song's fault.
wtf is wrong with u mate?
i don't care wtf u r and i did not start any cultural war. who is talking about religion and politics?? i don't understand why my reply offended you in anways. if you feel that i'm better than you by or have any advantage bt saying "i'm a persian and..." that's your problem dude. go see a doctor about that... and i don't understand why should i be jealous about u? for your persian girl? if you saw one, and made a song for her, i see one every week or two and don't make a song for any of them lol
you made a song for your persian girl and you posted it here and asked for opinions, and i gave you my impression about what you made. if you pay attention to my previous post, you'll see that in every part of it, i'm providing you with positive tips, and you should feel lucky that there is a persian guy like me in here who can help you...
about the tablas, if you heard a persian song with tablas in it, it was probably an indian cover song, or the song tried to sound indian and/or with indian flavor... not all the persians like these types of songs, arabic flavor? sure, indian? no.