Dunno much about out and out pop like this, but it sounds pretty accomplished and musically "right" to me, with lots of sonic spice. Only thing that really jumps out is that the bangin' chorus takes too long to get to. I would say ditch the delicate pizzi stuff at the intro, and replace with chorus, first half no kit, and sock it to em.
I just might have to try this when I get home...maybe a heavily filtered (or bit-crushed) half-chorus to start it off, no drums. Any commentary from anyone on the actual mix/master? I know it's slammed pretty hard, but it suits the genre to my ears.