After All
Old 2nd March 2012
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After All

Here is a new song:

The weather inside is frightful
But I can't go outside
The weather inside is frightful
But I can't go outside

I remember when I fell apart

And after all I've done
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Old 2nd March 2012
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I quite like this for some reason, not sure why. I was expecting a different theme @1:53. I like the middle 8 section. The vibe of it is nice. Could do with being mixed better though, keep the vibe just get it sounding better, you know ...
Old 2nd March 2012
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I really like this one as well. Great song. I think it's a tad too long in its current state though, because the part before the middle eight feels long to me. Also, I think it could use even more build, it could start with no percussive elements at all and develop from there. But it's got all the mojo a song needs.
Old 3rd March 2012
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Thanks for the feedback - the mix is still pretty rough.

I definitely need to shave off the middle section (and build up the third part of the song a little bit more.

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