Guitars may be a tad too loud in the intro but they sound good. Some weird vibrato effect when the singer sings falsetto? Drums could use more punch.....where's the kick? The drums gotta have some balls (but then again I'm biased) vocals sound good especially the harmonies. Oh I just noticed the bass could come up. Yeah, overall there is not a lot of punch or low end there although I am listening to ipod earphones.
It's not too bad, just some minor changes I would make it it were me. Nice job.
Good guitar sounds, and vocal stands up well, but overall the mix is overly compressed and dinky. Drums bass and overall tone needs more girth, punch and air. I'm guessing there isn't much in the way of analog-osity in this production. It lacks the three-dimensionality you get from tape.