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Radio Pop Song
Old 7th March 2015
  #1
Radio Pop Song

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g0f4kq6yAbA

This is one of latest pop productions I made recently. Let me know what you think. I also written the whole song.

I'm not 100% happy with the vocal sound, because they didn't have time to come to my studio to record it.
Old 8th March 2015
  #2
Sounds great to me! Sounds as good as any other songs on the radio.

cheers
Old 9th March 2015
  #3
Gear Nut
 

Mix is great. Lots of sparkle. Cool song too.
Old 9th March 2015
  #4
thanks guys!

any advices about arrangement?
Old 9th March 2015
  #5
Here for the gear
You are the best.....Excelent....
Old 10th March 2015
  #6
Gear Maniac
 

Nice song. I thought it was very well composed and produced. There were some things that sounded a bit unusual to me (not necessarily negative. Just jumped out as curious): The main one was the rap verse that acted as a pre-chorus but was different from the pre-chorus in the first section. It sounded like it could be a bit out of place, but since I don't know the language I might be off here.

Personally, I also would have liked to have heard the first pre-chorus repeat at some point, and I probably would've opted to make the bridge a bit longer so that the end of the song is not as chorus-heavy (the last minute and a half of the song, out of 3.5 minutes, is entirely made up of repetitions of the chorus, with the exception of the 10-second bridge). I am attaching a visual timeline so you have a better idea what I'm talking about.

Again, these are not necessarily negative comments, just things that I would perhaps do differently due to personal taste.
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Old 10th March 2015
  #7
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Nice song. I thought it was very well composed and produced. There were some things that sounded a bit unusual to me (not necessarily negative. Just jumped out as curious): The main one was the rap verse that acted as a pre-chorus but was different from the pre-chorus in the first section. It sounded like it could be a bit out of place, but since I don't know the language I might be off here.

Personally, I also would have liked to have heard the first pre-chorus repeat at some point, and I probably would've opted to make the bridge a bit longer so that the end of the song is not as chorus-heavy (the last minute and a half of the song, out of 3.5 minutes, is entirely made up of repetitions of the chorus, with the exception of the 10-second bridge). I am attaching a visual timeline so you have a better idea what I'm talking about.

Again, these are not necessarily negative comments, just things that I would perhaps do differently due to personal taste.
wow, this is impressive opinion I will think about it in the future. I really like to learn new stuff about arrangements so this is very good advice. thanks!
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