Thanks for the response, i know it would benifit from real drums ,but i do not have a drummer, and record all my material in my small apartment.
so did you like the song ? any feedback is better than none.
I like the vocal, but the delay on the left is distracting. the longer delay on the right seems to work though. I'd either turn that shorter one down or eliminate it as it just seems to muddy things up right now.
I'd bring the guitar out of the center too (double it) - the mix sounds basically mono right now, other than the backup up vox and vocal delay.
The guitar playing could be improved in some of those guitar fills. It's a cool guitar part though.
As far as the drums - if you can't use real ones then I'd at least recommend better sounding and more interesting programmed ones.