Any comments on this song and arrangement would be appreciated,bass and vox will be re recorded,as will maybe a couple of the guitar bits,it's a bit rugged now but what about the song idea,any comments?

It's good man. Depends what your goal is with it?

Hahaha, **** a year to get a reply. cheers man, its already finished and out in stores now, Poet Laureatte is the artist, its his 1st full length album, out through Reverberation Records. Actually just finished the 2nd full length album today.
Time does fly.

haha, didn't notice your thread date. How is the album going? making any money?

Dunno yet gotta wait till the end of the quarter. I know a few have sold. Only been out 2 weeks. Hopefully I can get that diamond encrusted nut scratcher for christmas, hehehaha. Just kiddin. We've been getting some great feedback. Just too much swearing for commercial radio I think, well so we are led to believe, I thought you had to say F#$# alot to get on radio. The new album is heaps better. Heaps better beats and stuff.
Hey where are ya from Jazzy, I'm from near Manly way, what sort of stuff are you doing?

Heath