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Old 9th January 2012
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Originally Posted by Arthur Stone View Post
@pinkheadedbug - great tune, really upbeat...reminds me of Lennon-McCartney. By way of positive feedback I should say that for me the track sounded 'too full' in the first section and IMO a more laid back intro would allow you to bring in the fullness later as an effect. Great track tho.

@evangelista - really cool vibe...the fullness works here from the outset as it's hooky...great guitar tone...maybe a dB at 230Hz on the snare would add definition/punch to the mid-low. Great sound though...classic sounding.

I'd appreciate feedback on this track which was written and recorded in a few hours as part of the ShareCloud Sunday group on SoundCloud:

It's a bit rough but I'd appreciate any advice on composition (or anything else). Thanks
Nothing grabbed me about this. . . however I definitely feel that at one minute you could have a few extra bars to allow the music to breath, and the listener reflect.

Cheers,