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Old 31st May 2006
  #2
Here for the gear
 

You need to tighten up the song... sounds like you're struggling to keep everything in time.

The entire composition lacks punch. Kick drum is almost non-existant and totally lost in the track. The high hat is way too dominant... it's stepping all over the snare, which itself sounds lifeless.

What guitar amp are you using? The guitar lacks complexity, chunk, and dynamics.

I know this is just a demo, but if you're going to use this demo to shop around for gigs and such, you need to spend a little more time with getting your tones right. Especially the guitar tones since those are what driving the song.