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Old 5th January 2012
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Originally Posted by pinkheadedbug View Post
Huge props to the Gearslutz Gods for providing this forum!

This is a thread to post rough demos of songs, for critique NOT of production but of composition. So out-of-tune vocals or crappy recordings are totally fine -- this is about the song, not the performance.

Here's a song I just finished but am still noodling on. What I like about it so far is the chordal structure, the way the chorus kicks in, and the way it keeps on modulating. Not sure about the lyrics yet.

I hate to be nagative, but its kind of hard to hear the melodic contour and stuff due to the vocals being that bad. You cant ask someone to judge a song when you can't hear the song due to the performance on it. I feel that's probably why you've tried to exclude out of tune vocals from the critique, but I just cant listen to it properly because of it.