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Old 15th June 2020
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Originally Posted by Kronos147 View Post
Drums added. Vocals tuned.

Hi -
Did you mean to hard correct the vox? I think this type of (what i perceive to be) hard correction doesn't fit with this style of tune. I know pop folks do this so you can intentionally hear it as an effect. Was that your intent?

For the drums, they are a bit clunky and monotonous. The biggest reason for that is that there is never a straight bass drum hitting on 1 and 3 in the whole tune. That very simple change, say to the chorus sections, would really assist in differentiating the very simple parts of the tune and help relieve the monotony created by the lagging "ands" throughout.

No worries - you can toss my comment away if you like. Just another internet opinion.

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