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Old 23rd May 2020
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Originally Posted by Mr Funk View Post
The song is now longer. Longer intro (wanted to try it). Also small break between first chorus and second verse now. I added horns, have they improved the track? Have they hurt it at all?

Still want to do something with chorus to make it more distinct. and I will try 1 or 2 bmp slower when I record vocals for real. I will also get a guitar or sax solo for the end break section, but I'm leaning towards guitar as it's less cheesy.
Hi Kane, hope all is well with you.
Thanks for posting.
Very briefly: I think it starts out very busy so it is hard to develop, hence the vocal can't really grab the listener. I think the easiest way to explain it is if you listen at the beginning and then listen at the end. Has the listener had a journey or had it been the same road for the duration?

Just my $0.02.