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Old 8th January 2020
  #19
Here for the gear
 

A promise is a promise. It's basically identical to what I removed, but with the exception of including an instrumental pre-chorus (?) and what I pictured as the verse. The delay & reverb have been slightly decreased as well.

Bottom line is that I tried to apply most of your suggestions, and they didn't work out due to my own limitations. Although I focused years on theory, but song structure (as modern pop; modern as all the way from Beatles to latest pop songs) is like a totally new subject to me. To give you a glimpse of how far off I am, I had to google verse vs chorus chord progressions the other day. Yeah, I'm VERY far off. Maybe one day.
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