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Old 9th September 2015
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[QUOTE=PTCruiser1801;11319496]Hi everyone!

I am only new to this forum and relatively new to song writing and recording. I have recently uploaded my very first original song to soundcloud and I am looking for some feedback on it. If anyone has 3 minutes of free time, I would love to hear what you think!

Here is the link:

I like it, reminds me of REM. Needs a harmony from the second verse onward in my opinion to stop the vocal from getting monotonous. Lyrics are good but the vocal gets a bit tiring, so a key change, or harmony or something will elevate it.

Nice work.