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Old 17th August 2015
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Originally Posted by Mr Funk View Post
Nice song. Very good lyrics, good timing and I like the riff. I agree, a little more if a solo would have been a bonus and a key change going into the last chorus would have been great.

Your voice grew one throughout the song and I think sounds best in the choruses. If you were to ever record it again with another lead singer, definitely do the back vocals in the chorus as it suits you.
Thanks for the feedback and thanks for listening. This was my first album and I did it with kind of a assembly line methodology to be time efficient. Looking back, I wish I had just immersed myself in each song until I was in love with every aspect of it instead of rushing through each track and moving onto the next song. The modulating up for the last chorus is a good idea and just something I didn't think of because of my hurried state of mind. Good wisdom for my next project.
thanks,
Steve