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Old 2nd August 2014
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What a really great work, Donna!
I especially found this part amazing:

Quote:
Robby's guzzling rotgut
In a Tijuana bar
Wrestling with a memory
That grips him like a scar
Seriously, the first line is so well crafted! "Robby's guzzling rotgut" Have you seen what you made there? The Rob-rot and guz-gut thing sounds really great and rhythmical if you say it! Good work!
Moreover the whole song is powerful with a bit of sadness I really enjoy.