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Wonton 19th June 2020 06:44 PM

Some melodic techno
 
Hi all, a melodic techno number for your perusal, with a good amount of arpeggiation and space echo warbling....all done on OTB gear. Hope you enjoy and any feedback is massively appreciated!

Gear list:
TB-303
TX81Z
TR-909
TR-808
TR-606
SH-101
Korg P-61
Korg MS-10
Elektron A4
A beat-up Mackie 16 track mixer


Olecko 21st June 2020 07:55 AM

Mate, more work needed.
Drums and bass must be with a strong groove.
Synth are flat with "big mono" effect. They need more attention.
Track needs warmth and color.

Wonton 23rd June 2020 08:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Olecko (Post 14812412)
Mate, more work needed.
Drums and bass must be with a strong groove.
Synth are flat with "big mono" effect. They need more attention.
Track needs warmth and color.

Many thanks for the critique! I'm always happy and appreciative to get feedback about what needs to be improved and what people don't like. I totally agree with what you have to say, I think I'm pretty ignorant/inexperienced on the points you made, so I'm going to read up and work on improving those issues.

Musicncars 26th June 2020 02:09 AM

Nice!