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ELECTRO8914 16th April 2015 02:36 PM

Harsh/honest criticism on two tracks - help!
 
Hey fellow slutz. I've posted this track to soundcloud and need you guys' opinion on them. It's indie/ambient/chillwave/pop/electronic stuff..

If you don't have time to listen to both then at least some advice on one of them would be AMAZEBALLS!

Here's the track on sound cloud:

https://soundcloud.com/youngestknave/aloop-and-awash

ELECTRO8914 17th April 2015 12:29 PM

Thanks guys!

ranzee 17th April 2015 02:33 PM

I just went to listen to your tracks - and you've taken them off. Give people a chance to get there! There's a lot going on at the moment with Messe and all, so some patience might be in order.

ELECTRO8914 20th April 2015 03:16 PM

Oh gotcha-- well I posted it anyway. I'm used to people replying on here, quite fast actually:

Here's the track on sound cloud:

https://soundcloud.com/youngestknave/aloop-and-awash

ranzee 21st April 2015 03:56 AM

Interesting track. At first the tag states "Experimental" and was expecting something a lot different, instead I get a very ambient track. Very dreamy. I like the slow chord progression and the glitchy (almost sample-loop) sounds. I think its great - keep it up :)

BluethunderMUSIC 21st April 2015 10:18 PM

Hi!

I really would like to give feedback but you took the links down :(.

Bluethunder

ELECTRO8914 23rd April 2015 08:04 AM

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Originally Posted by BluethunderMUSIC (Post 10990581)
Hi!

I really would like to give feedback but you took the links down :(.

Bluethunder

Here's the track on sound cloud:

https://soundcloud.com/youngestknave/aloop-and-awash

BluethunderMUSIC 23rd April 2015 10:21 PM

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Originally Posted by ELECTRO8914 (Post 10994150)

Oh wow.

I think the reason why people didn't give feedback is because your track is VERY hard to 'judge'. The tag says experimental and it is just that.
The only things I can say is that I really enjoyed listening to this track this late at night. It is a chill kind of track. And it does its job good, although the echo such as 4:06 annoyed me as it seemed false. Nice flute play intro transistioning a new sound. The vocal sample gave me some sort of connection to track.

I felt like I was near a waterfall. And right after that, which brought a big smile on my face, your track has a waterfall thumbnail! Really great chill track. Added it to my liked tracks :).

I hope this is at least a bit usefull to you. Like I said, it is very hard to really give feedback on this in a production (Eq and so) kind of way. Please keep producing!
Blue