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slowed House/Dub track i made
Old 22nd October 2013
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slowed House/Dub track i made

Old 31st October 2013
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any opinions? criticism is welcome
Old 1st November 2013
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- The sounds don't really work together.
- There is no real "guideline" in the drums .. they seem to be randomly placed
- ^the same goes for the melody .. I don't get the melody. You have to make it so that the listener understand the melody the first time he/she hears it.

Maybe make it a little bit more "predictable" so that the listener can understand what the music is about.

I'm sorry if I sound harsh. You asked for an opinion.
Old 2nd November 2013
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I'm sorry to say this, but I think it wasn't very good. It sounded mostly like a bunch of random sounds and melodies thrown together, with no thought and purpose to it.

You could try listening to some similar, good examples of that style of music. Listen how each sound has it's place (both mixing and arrangement-wise), nothing sounds like it doesn't belong there, all the notes and chords work together etc.
Old 2nd November 2013
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JK but really if you aren't trolling then you need to just keep at it! it will get better in time , maybe another 5 years
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