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Harsh/honest criticism on two tracks - help!
Old 16th April 2015
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Harsh/honest criticism on two tracks - help!

Hey fellow slutz. I've posted this track to soundcloud and need you guys' opinion on them. It's indie/ambient/chillwave/pop/electronic stuff..

If you don't have time to listen to both then at least some advice on one of them would be AMAZEBALLS!

Here's the track on sound cloud:

https://soundcloud.com/youngestknave/aloop-and-awash

Last edited by ELECTRO8914; 23rd April 2015 at 08:03 AM.. Reason: new link
Old 17th April 2015
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Thanks guys!

Last edited by ELECTRO8914; 23rd April 2015 at 02:30 PM.. Reason: gracious
Old 17th April 2015
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I just went to listen to your tracks - and you've taken them off. Give people a chance to get there! There's a lot going on at the moment with Messe and all, so some patience might be in order.
Old 20th April 2015
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Oh gotcha-- well I posted it anyway. I'm used to people replying on here, quite fast actually:

Here's the track on sound cloud:

https://soundcloud.com/youngestknave/aloop-and-awash
Old 21st April 2015
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Interesting track. At first the tag states "Experimental" and was expecting something a lot different, instead I get a very ambient track. Very dreamy. I like the slow chord progression and the glitchy (almost sample-loop) sounds. I think its great - keep it up
Old 21st April 2015
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Hi!

I really would like to give feedback but you took the links down :(.

Bluethunder
Old 23rd April 2015
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Originally Posted by BluethunderMUSIC View Post
Hi!

I really would like to give feedback but you took the links down :(.

Bluethunder
Here's the track on sound cloud:

https://soundcloud.com/youngestknave/aloop-and-awash
Old 23rd April 2015
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ELECTRO8914 View Post
Oh wow.

I think the reason why people didn't give feedback is because your track is VERY hard to 'judge'. The tag says experimental and it is just that.
The only things I can say is that I really enjoyed listening to this track this late at night. It is a chill kind of track. And it does its job good, although the echo such as 4:06 annoyed me as it seemed false. Nice flute play intro transistioning a new sound. The vocal sample gave me some sort of connection to track.

I felt like I was near a waterfall. And right after that, which brought a big smile on my face, your track has a waterfall thumbnail! Really great chill track. Added it to my liked tracks .

I hope this is at least a bit usefull to you. Like I said, it is very hard to really give feedback on this in a production (Eq and so) kind of way. Please keep producing!
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