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advice for new song PLEASE HELP...
Old 7th September 2011
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advice for new song PLEASE HELP...

hey guys i started this idea for a song tonight, i made a rough 30 second version of its main theme. any ideas for more tracks to add etc...
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Old 7th September 2011
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sounds like a chorus to me. All you need now is a vocal melody and some verses and a bridge. I liked the sounds
Old 7th September 2011
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Theres one sound in there which sounds very wrong, its like a distorted zap, a kind of dissonant pluck on the off beat. I really think this should be removed, it sounds out of place..

Thats all though, other than that well done

needs arranging though. post the final up when your doneskies.
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I don't know what that sound is I hear it as well
Old 7th September 2011
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You seem to be making (and sharing with us) about 3 tracks a day. Are you on some hardcore Ritalin pills?
Old 7th September 2011
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Quote:
Originally Posted by studiomood View Post
Theres one sound in there which sounds very wrong, its like a distorted zap, a kind of dissonant pluck on the off beat.
Completely agree.

I also don't care much for the synth sax lead sound either.

I like the melody though.
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Making music is really my only passion there it is.
Old 9th September 2011
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Quote:
Originally Posted by studiomood View Post
Theres one sound in there which sounds very wrong, its like a distorted zap, a kind of dissonant pluck on the off beat. I really think this should be removed, it sounds out of place..

Thats all though, other than that well done

needs arranging though. post the final up when your doneskies.
Actually, That distorted zap gives that little motif something unique (has a kind of 8 bit Sid chip quality). Maybe not used as many times, but it is those kinds of sounds that can often elevate a track and put an original stamp on it. Very difficult to know until there is a vocal melody line added. JMHO heh
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