Death Metal Mix/Song

Bloodsoaked · 31st October 2006, 01:54 AM

This is a Death Metal song

I would love to get feedback on the overall mix of this song and the song (song writing) as well. Any and all comments are welcome good or bad.

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=5441

Info:

4 guitar tracks 1 80% left, 1 80% right, 1 100% left , 1 100% right
1 bass track centered
1 drum machine track centered
1 main vocal track with some 2nd track fill-ins

The guitars are all done with my V-Amp Pro. 2 tracks with the Off-Axis Cabinet and 2 tracks with the Vintage 78 Cabinet. I also used the V-Amp Pro to record the bass track as well.

Here are the lyrics as well if anyone is interested:

SELF MUTILATION

Mutilate Yourself
Sensory Stimulation
Production of Endorphins
Reduce Dysphoria

Destruction of Tissue
Cutting The Skin
Pulling Out Hair
Amputation

Breaking Bones
Scratching
Damage Genitals
Gouging Eyes

Self Mutilation
Revel In Bloodshed
Self Mutilation
Suffocate The Hate
Self Mutilation
Love The Pain
Self Mutilation
Depression Arise

Obsessive Compulsive
Parasuicidal Behavior
Self Medication
Relief is Temporary

Lack Self Control
Addictive Like Nature
Sense of Power
I Can't Stop

Self Mutilation
Revel In Bloodshed
Self Mutilation
Suffocate The Hate
Self Mutilation
Love The Pain
Self Mutilation
Depression Arise

The Feast Begins
Peel Off Your Skin
Taste The Sins of Your Soul
Mental Anguish Erupts
Mutilation of Worthlessness
The Hate For Yourself So Vile

Self Mutilation
Revel In Bloodshed
Self Mutilation
Suffocate The Hate
Self Mutilation
Love The Pain
Self Mutilation
Depression Arise

Dark Secret
Shame and Guilt
Feel Inadequate
Revel The Pain

Wounds Infected
Permanent Scarring
Blood Flows
Followed By Tears

Razors,Knives
Scissors, Needles
Broken Glass
Whatever I Find

Feeling Alive
Dead Inside
Lost Control
I Need Help....Help.....Help.....Help.....Help...... .Help

Slaytex · 3rd November 2006, 12:09 AM

Is that an Alesis SR-16 drum machine I hear? Nice tom toms.....
Gtr's sound ok.

-Noodles- · 3rd November 2006, 06:39 PM

Blast beats - watch the intensity of the snare, it has an ability to "ride up" into the mix.

Infact... when the double kicks come in later on the in song - you'd be best to lower the whole drum kit by a little bit, to my ears the guitars aren't at the forefront enough.

[imo, take it or leave it]

Good sounding stuff though :)

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31st October 2006, 01:54 AM	#1
Bloodsoaked Gear Head Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 47	Death Metal Mix/Song This is a Death Metal song I would love to get feedback on the overall mix of this song and the song (song writing) as well. Any and all comments are welcome good or bad. http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=5441 Info: 4 guitar tracks 1 80% left, 1 80% right, 1 100% left , 1 100% right 1 bass track centered 1 drum machine track centered 1 main vocal track with some 2nd track fill-ins The guitars are all done with my V-Amp Pro. 2 tracks with the Off-Axis Cabinet and 2 tracks with the Vintage 78 Cabinet. I also used the V-Amp Pro to record the bass track as well. Here are the lyrics as well if anyone is interested: SELF MUTILATION Mutilate Yourself Sensory Stimulation Production of Endorphins Reduce Dysphoria Destruction of Tissue Cutting The Skin Pulling Out Hair Amputation Breaking Bones Scratching Damage Genitals Gouging Eyes Self Mutilation Revel In Bloodshed Self Mutilation Suffocate The Hate Self Mutilation Love The Pain Self Mutilation Depression Arise Obsessive Compulsive Parasuicidal Behavior Self Medication Relief is Temporary Lack Self Control Addictive Like Nature Sense of Power I Can't Stop Self Mutilation Revel In Bloodshed Self Mutilation Suffocate The Hate Self Mutilation Love The Pain Self Mutilation Depression Arise The Feast Begins Peel Off Your Skin Taste The Sins of Your Soul Mental Anguish Erupts Mutilation of Worthlessness The Hate For Yourself So Vile Self Mutilation Revel In Bloodshed Self Mutilation Suffocate The Hate Self Mutilation Love The Pain Self Mutilation Depression Arise Dark Secret Shame and Guilt Feel Inadequate Revel The Pain Wounds Infected Permanent Scarring Blood Flows Followed By Tears Razors,Knives Scissors, Needles Broken Glass Whatever I Find Feeling Alive Dead Inside Lost Control I Need Help....Help.....Help.....Help.....Help...... .Help __________________ My Death Metal band - Bloodsoaked

3rd November 2006, 12:09 AM	#2
Slaytex Lives for gear Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Charlotte Posts: 950	Is that an Alesis SR-16 drum machine I hear? Nice tom toms..... Gtr's sound ok. __________________ Clayton Yunt Full Volume Sound Full Volume Sound

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3rd November 2006, 06:39 PM	#3
-Noodles- Lives for gear Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Scotland, UK Posts: 527	Blast beats - watch the intensity of the snare, it has an ability to "ride up" into the mix. Infact... when the double kicks come in later on the in song - you'd be best to lower the whole drum kit by a little bit, to my ears the guitars aren't at the forefront enough. [imo, take it or leave it] Good sounding stuff though :)