<<Acoustic song comments/suggestion>>

digmudvayne4lif · 29th October 2006, 03:46 PM

Hey this the first acoustic song I've made/recorded so just lookin for some suggestions, comments or whatever on the recording or the actual song. any help's appreciated. thanks

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=5420

huarez · 30th October 2006, 08:32 PM

Maybe you should compare to other recordings you like in the same style..... and ask yourself

T9c · 3rd November 2006, 11:04 PM

OK, I'll offer a suggestion. The lower pitch vox parts are not up front enough, especially at the beginning. Maybe a good comp would help? Or, if your DAWing, envelope the sh*t out of it. Good warm tone from the guitar.

Might double your background vox too for a little more life.

Rick

flail19 · 3rd November 2006, 11:17 PM

Double the vox track in the chorus for a more dramtic upfront effect. Compress the vox more. There are some slight timing issues with the singer and guitar. The ooohs and aahhhs for background vocals distract from the main singer and are a bit off key. Nice job, overall. Keep it up and have fun!

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29th October 2006, 03:46 PM	#1
digmudvayne4lif Gear interested Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 1	<<Acoustic song comments/suggestion>> Hey this the first acoustic song I've made/recorded so just lookin for some suggestions, comments or whatever on the recording or the actual song. any help's appreciated. thanks http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=5420

3rd November 2006, 11:17 PM	#4
flail19 Lives for gear Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Colorado Posts: 749	Double the vox track in the chorus for a more dramtic upfront effect. Compress the vox more. There are some slight timing issues with the singer and guitar. The ooohs and aahhhs for background vocals distract from the main singer and are a bit off key. Nice job, overall. Keep it up and have fun! __________________ Singer, Songwriter, Musician.............Dad. "You're so money and you don't even know it!"

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30th October 2006, 08:32 PM	#2
huarez Gear maniac Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: EUROPE Posts: 225	Maybe you should compare to other recordings you like in the same style..... and ask yourself

3rd November 2006, 11:04 PM	#3
T9c Gear maniac Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Houston Posts: 203	OK, I'll offer a suggestion. The lower pitch vox parts are not up front enough, especially at the beginning. Maybe a good comp would help? Or, if your DAWing, envelope the sh*t out of it. Good warm tone from the guitar. Might double your background vox too for a little more life. Rick