Feedback Please!!!!!!

Justice · 1st March 2006, 06:47 PM

Attachment 16544 Give me some feedback on this track please. We are getting great responces from the stations and some labels but I want to make it the best before we go all out

Thanks!!

Justice
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blayz2002 · 1st March 2006, 08:56 PM

Yeah the mix is phat I like the way the bottom end punches. On the track as a whole I think the arrangment could be tighter, it sort of seems to not know where it's going (too many drops) also the mix is overpowering the vocal..in the sense of I don't find the singers voice strong enough to hold the track...I'd go with more BV's to fill it up at bit...just my personal opinion. Good luck though.

guerillamixer · 2nd March 2006, 03:00 PM

OK, so I'm thinking your going for a slick a sound as you can
manage without losing to much edge, so let me now if I'm off
track here. Any artist/mix you are comparing it to?

VOX
I like the smokey character of the singing vox, but I can hear
a short room around it, and that pulls it away from the in the faceness
it needs. Same issue with the mc, not present enough.

This may be against your style, but you could pitch correct the
singing to push it a little slicker,

The vox BVs feel very dry, could be lusher, like
blayz said, could do with a few more parts. A little delay
might help lift the main vox as well.

BEATS.
The basics of it work for me. I dig the moogish bass sounds.
When you drop the drums the track loses drive, so you could
either thicken the vox, or add some more rhythm parts to drive
it in that section.

Good lucK

DungBeatle · 2nd March 2006, 05:35 PM

New guy here, amateur only. Enjoyed listening to your track. Vox are cool, I like the gritty sound. A little pitchy in places. I like the effects and synth stuff. Time says 3:57, is that a little long for this style? I only ask because I'm not sure. I think the vocals are a bit too dry also.

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1st March 2006, 06:47 PM	#1
Justice Lives for gear Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 529	Feedback Please!!!!!! Attachment 16544 Give me some feedback on this track please. We are getting great responces from the stations and some labels but I want to make it the best before we go all out Thanks!! Justice SE __________________ Justice "Big Jus" www.myspace.com/saej http://www.myspace.com/suburbanentertainmentllc

1st March 2006, 08:56 PM	#2
blayz2002 Lives for gear Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: London UK Posts: 878	Yeah the mix is phat I like the way the bottom end punches. On the track as a whole I think the arrangment could be tighter, it sort of seems to not know where it's going (too many drops) also the mix is overpowering the vocal..in the sense of I don't find the singers voice strong enough to hold the track...I'd go with more BV's to fill it up at bit...just my personal opinion. Good luck though. __________________ "This is what I love about mixing though ...it's never the same twice"!

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2nd March 2006, 03:00 PM	#3
guerillamixer Gear nut Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 139	OK, so I'm thinking your going for a slick a sound as you can manage without losing to much edge, so let me now if I'm off track here. Any artist/mix you are comparing it to? VOX I like the smokey character of the singing vox, but I can hear a short room around it, and that pulls it away from the in the faceness it needs. Same issue with the mc, not present enough. This may be against your style, but you could pitch correct the singing to push it a little slicker, The vox BVs feel very dry, could be lusher, like blayz said, could do with a few more parts. A little delay might help lift the main vox as well. BEATS. The basics of it work for me. I dig the moogish bass sounds. When you drop the drums the track loses drive, so you could either thicken the vox, or add some more rhythm parts to drive it in that section. Good lucK

2nd March 2006, 05:35 PM	#4
DungBeatle Gear interested Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 3	New guy here, amateur only. Enjoyed listening to your track. Vox are cool, I like the gritty sound. A little pitchy in places. I like the effects and synth stuff. Time says 3:57, is that a little long for this style? I only ask because I'm not sure. I think the vocals are a bit too dry also.