Feedback on a mix appreciated!!!

Oh My! · 17th August 2005, 07:52 AM

Here is my second ever mix. This is the follow up to the other track speechless. Same artist Lina Marie. All tracked and mixed by me. Let me know what u think feedback appreciated. The mix is not complete so far pretty much done with drums. Just workin on stringas guitar and vox now. Any tips appreciated.

http://zebox.com/cgi-bin/artists/dl....ible.m3u+qp+m3

scruffydog · 17th August 2005, 10:21 AM

Give me a chorus please...intro is wrong for the song..stopped listening at the second flute solo chorus bit..as would any pop mogul..
nice one
scruffy

scruffydog · 17th August 2005, 10:49 AM

Sorry to be a bit hard on your work in progress..
but your work is good..
it's just that you gotta work out the deatails after the song is written..
you don't get many chances to show a track in the real world so I thought I would just say it like it is..
If a pro listens to your track all the way through..he must be a friend!
often times if it goes tits up inside the first cycle..its out the window..
too many songs in this world..fact
But you are doing good basic production work..
Best wishes.
scruffydog

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Oh My! Gear interested Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 10	Feedback on a mix appreciated!!! Here is my second ever mix. This is the follow up to the other track speechless. Same artist Lina Marie. All tracked and mixed by me. Let me know what u think feedback appreciated. The mix is not complete so far pretty much done with drums. Just workin on stringas guitar and vox now. Any tips appreciated. http://zebox.com/cgi-bin/artists/dl....ible.m3u+qp+m3

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17th August 2005, 10:21 AM	#2
scruffydog Gear addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: North London.UK Posts: 405	Give me a chorus please...intro is wrong for the song..stopped listening at the second flute solo chorus bit..as would any pop mogul.. nice one scruffy

17th August 2005, 10:49 AM	#3
scruffydog Gear addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: North London.UK Posts: 405	Sorry to be a bit hard on your work in progress.. but your work is good.. it's just that you gotta work out the deatails after the song is written.. you don't get many chances to show a track in the real world so I thought I would just say it like it is.. If a pro listens to your track all the way through..he must be a friend! often times if it goes tits up inside the first cycle..its out the window.. too many songs in this world..fact But you are doing good basic production work.. Best wishes. scruffydog