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Old 9th April 2005, 01:11 PM   #1
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Thumbs up Critique This Mix Please

thanks in advance, i'd like feedback, suggestions, any comments, i did all the work alone, so i'm hopin i'd get assistance from you guys here!

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a track i been workin on, any questions i shall answer.... i guess all i'm asking is to tell me what u like or what u dont, what i can do to better what i have now...

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Old 10th April 2005, 04:32 AM   #2
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come on wake up somebody!
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Old 12th April 2005, 02:42 PM   #3
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Hmmm...I don't think it sounds very good. First: there is a strange ambience on the western and the vox - probably the room it's recorded in. The mix lacks overall punch and the vox should be compressed more. The comb filtering efx. on the vox annoys me. I don't like the kick very much.

I'm sorry - but I think your track needs work, woth regards to both arrangement and mix.

Keep it up duuuuuuuuude
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Old 12th April 2005, 11:16 PM   #4
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Same same

Agree on the guitar sound, does not do it for me, not the flute either, nor the kick drum, nor the lyrics, or the song.
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