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22nd June 2008, 08:37 AM
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| Lives for gear  Join Date: Jun 2005
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| the la la song A project Im working on... http://swingdoc720.tripod.com/sitebu...01-lalar10.mp3 mix suggestions please? |
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23rd June 2008, 06:36 AM
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| Lives for gear Join Date: Jun 2005
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| bump not about the writing, (not mine), the mix please |
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23rd June 2008, 06:12 PM
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| Gear addict  Join Date: May 2008
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| Reminds me of the beatles, the vocal seems a little harsh but overall I like the tune, and the feel. Well the vocal seems less harsh then the shitty intro.
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23rd June 2008, 08:06 PM
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| Lives for gear Join Date: Jun 2005
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I agree, I want to put the vocal 'in the mix' a little better. I also want to carve that guitar intro at least in half, maybe kill it all together and just open with the drum fill right before V1. | |
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23rd June 2008, 10:26 PM
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| Gear addict Join Date: May 2008
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| Great ideas man! Go with your gut.
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27th June 2008, 09:04 AM
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| Gear Head Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Portland
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| yeah I'd say bag the intro and start with a roll. The intro is such a different feel than the rest of the song that it almost throws you off. I don't think the vox are bad, but do think they start out a little shaky improving as the song progress. I do think you should add a vocal harmony in the chorus. You do come in later with the group chant, which is hot! I dig the whistle part. I like the laughing and live feel towards the end, gives it character and a fun aspect. I feel like you could even go more epic with this idea... maybe end it acapella with just the vocals chanting (and people laughing/partying and what not in the background). Or have an acapella group chant towards the end then bring it back hard for one final chorus. Pretty solid tune, I like.
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