Any advice on these vocals

Biggsheff · 26th May 2008, 07:12 AM

These vocals were recorded in a 11x14 room with no sound dampening. So thats problem 1 right out of the gate. I'm working on the funds for the upgrade. I just need some honest critic of these vocals. This is probably my best results so far. I want to know if anyone hears any problems and if so what can I do to fix them. Thanks.

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Biggsheff · 28th May 2008, 07:22 AM

Damn is it that bad ?

Biggsheff · 10th July 2008, 06:39 AM

Yeah ok

dblackburn80 · 10th July 2008, 03:36 PM

I think its got a lot of potential. The problem with the song is more that you are from Florida and thats what you're representing. This needs something hot (something NEW and hot) that shows you're from Florida representing but also that your production skills cant be messed with.

The lyrics are there, the themes are there too, but the production lacks style.

If you had a Miami bass hihat or something DnB inspired, that would really liven the track up a bit.

This may sound messed up but, do you think someone would bump this in their car, coming into a parking lot, making an entrance with the way the track is set up now? No it needs more of the high end to break through all the bass thats going on.

just my opinion.

Biggsheff · 15th July 2008, 06:13 AM

I was lookin for critic on just the vocals. The beat is a instrumental of a track by Baby an Lil Wayne. Its been all over the radio. I guess it was good enough for an album an radio release. Thanks for the feedback though.

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Biggsheff Gear nut Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Pensacola, FL Posts: 100	Any advice on these vocals These vocals were recorded in a 11x14 room with no sound dampening. So thats problem 1 right out of the gate. I'm working on the funds for the upgrade. I just need some honest critic of these vocals. This is probably my best results so far. I want to know if anyone hears any problems and if so what can I do to fix them. Thanks. MySpace.com - SOUTHERN STATE PRODUCTIONS - Pensacola, Florida - Rap / Hip Hop - www.myspace.com/southernstateproductions

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28th May 2008, 07:22 AM	#2
Biggsheff Gear nut Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Pensacola, FL Posts: 100	Damn is it that bad ?

10th July 2008, 06:39 AM	#3
Biggsheff Gear nut Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Pensacola, FL Posts: 100	Yeah ok

10th July 2008, 03:36 PM	#4
dblackburn80 Gear interested Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Philly, PA Posts: 11	I think its got a lot of potential. The problem with the song is more that you are from Florida and thats what you're representing. This needs something hot (something NEW and hot) that shows you're from Florida representing but also that your production skills cant be messed with. The lyrics are there, the themes are there too, but the production lacks style. If you had a Miami bass hihat or something DnB inspired, that would really liven the track up a bit. This may sound messed up but, do you think someone would bump this in their car, coming into a parking lot, making an entrance with the way the track is set up now? No it needs more of the high end to break through all the bass thats going on. just my opinion.

15th July 2008, 06:13 AM	#5
Biggsheff Gear nut Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Pensacola, FL Posts: 100	I was lookin for critic on just the vocals. The beat is a instrumental of a track by Baby an Lil Wayne. Its been all over the radio. I guess it was good enough for an album an radio release. Thanks for the feedback though.