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12th May 2008, 08:04 AM
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| Gear addict Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: san francisco bay area
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 | "The Story"(mix advice please...) urSESSION - Moeses Soulright - SAN FRANCISCO - United States top track... have trouble getting the deep voice to stik out in the mix been using UAD-1, pultec and the 1073 plugins have helped, but too much high end in there i think let me know
__________________ and past mistakes ya made are laid freshly on my brain took the train to a place called change but came back the same in a frame of mind that holds Divincci's now loves convinced me so loneliness is out to lynch me. pinch me!!! awake from dreams but it seems we've just avoided it you got a spell on me, and i'll never try destroying it/ www.myspace.com/soulright |
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13th May 2008, 12:34 AM
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| Gear nut  Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada
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| I don't usually like rap, but this is damned good. Backing track has a nice '60s Motown vibe. Your lyrics are really good, too. I can see what you mean about the lower voice being a bit buried. Don't really have any suggestions as your gear and production is far beyond anything I've ever done or worked with. Sorry that I don't have anything constructive to say, but I thought I'd chime in anyway since so often songs just come and go on this forum without anyone commenting. You definitely deserve some feedback, even if it's only compliments for a job well done thus far. |
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13th May 2008, 04:52 AM
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| Gear maniac  Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Brooklyn
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| sounds like the track is mixed nice (although i'd like to hear more snare) and the vocals are mixed nice but the vocals and the track together are not blending. it sounds like the vocals are just sitting on top of a 2mix. do you have all of the beat/music seperated? i'd suggest making more space for the vocals to sit. they may solve your problem. cool track though... good work!
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14th May 2008, 06:44 AM
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| Gear addict Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: san francisco bay area
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| yeah the beat is 2tracked...so not much i can do there... i often have a hard time getin my voice to shine through the beat...cus my voice gets stuck with the lows of the beat...the one drawback of having a deep ass voice thanks for the feedback though appreciate it
__________________ and past mistakes ya made are laid freshly on my brain took the train to a place called change but came back the same in a frame of mind that holds Divincci's now loves convinced me so loneliness is out to lynch me. pinch me!!! awake from dreams but it seems we've just avoided it you got a spell on me, and i'll never try destroying it/ www.myspace.com/soulright |
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15th May 2008, 01:57 AM
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| Gear Head Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Portland
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| I don't really think it's too far off... Try boosting the vox around 300hz and cutting the music track a little around there. You could also try cutting the vox around 1000hz. Try boosting around 6khz in the vox for presence and clarity. I dig it man, you sound like a G.
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19th May 2008, 08:55 AM
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| Gear addict Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: san francisco bay area
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| i think it might just be time to upgrade the equipment had to sell my studio now i'm left with an old AKG C300 and an Aphex 207 both got like 10 yrs on em
__________________ and past mistakes ya made are laid freshly on my brain took the train to a place called change but came back the same in a frame of mind that holds Divincci's now loves convinced me so loneliness is out to lynch me. pinch me!!! awake from dreams but it seems we've just avoided it you got a spell on me, and i'll never try destroying it/ www.myspace.com/soulright |
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