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| Gear interested Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: South, UK
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| Hey guys, Stumbled across your forum just recently, it's absolutely brilliant, picked up a lot of useful tips off here! My name's Adam, I live in the UK and I'm studying a BTEC National Diploma in Music Technology. As part of my final project I have to produce a portfolio of 15-20 mins of recorded material, and this is the first song of that portfolio recorded for a local band where I live. They're kinda going for the sorta-Paramore, New Found Glory vibe, which is kinda cool I guess, but much of that particular genre is very heavily produced! I'm trying to produce something fairly close to that kinda thing, but I'm having some trouble. I've attached a copy of my mix so far. It was done in 3-4 hours in Pro Tools and I was fairly happy with it when I bounced it down on Thursday. I like to listen to and songs I make a lot until anything really starts to bug me. Listening to it today, I think the recording sounds kinda hollow? I also think I've used a little too much delay on the guitars in an attempt to give that 'big guitars' feel, and too much reverb on the kit? Can anyone part some insight into what I might need to do? And general thoughts on my mix too? Feel free to be as brutal as you want, I'm very much still learning and would love to hear what my recording peers make of my first steps into this game! Thanks guys! |
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| Gear nut Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada
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| Here are my thoughts on first listen: Good song, but could do with some polishing. - Vocals are too dry - Snare sounds like it's in a completely different space than the rest of the kit - Yes, too much reverb or something on the guitars. But this may be a relative statement when comparing the guitars to the vocals, snare, etc. - Some strange stuff going on with the bass tonally. Also, do you have it panned pretty far left for most of the song? If so, personally, I'd bring it back to the middle. Decent first mix. Looking forward to hearing some subsequent adjustments. |
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| Gear addict Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Murfreesboro, TN
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| I tend to agree but at least you can hear the snare in this nightmare. Not directed at you or your mixing but these guys are not good (I'm being nice tonight). I don't know if anyone can make a good mix with this kind of crap. I'm hoping your marks don't rely on the quality of the players. Seriously, you seem to be doing quite well and just keep going until you hit on what you want. I would try to work on it alone as much as I could and not involve them until you have it sounding more, uh, like music? I have a feeling they are all over you telling you to do this and that and not helping at all. Time alone to experiment can only help. |
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| Gear interested Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: South, UK
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| Thanks for the reply dude. Agreed the vocals are a little dry. I thought it might have to do with the fact I had to squash the bejeezus out of it to get the singers voice louder in the verse. When she was really going for it, she'd get closer to the mic, and farther away in quieter sections. I did try to tell her not to do this, but I guess she didn't take to it. Do you have any suggestions to make it a bit more 'sparkly'? Quote:
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Thanks for the advice dude I really appreciate it! I'll keep you posted when I can come up with something better.
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| Gear Head Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Helsinki, Finland
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| Hi there.. This is cool, because i produce/mix same kind of stuff. First of all there is far too much distortion on the guitars and too less middles. They´re lacking punch. Bd and sd does not fit at all together. Vocalsound is ok. Maybe little bit too tight and out of tune. If i mixed this id trig the snare and bassdrum and put some autotune on leadvocal. Share the second mix also.. :)
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| Gear interested Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: South, UK
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__________________ "To sing you must first open your mouth. You must have a pair of lungs and a little knowledge of music. It is not necessary to have an accordion, or a guitar. The essential thing is that I want to sing. Then this is a song, I'm singing." - H. Miller | |
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| Gear maniac Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Chicago
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| For the vocal I would suggest treating it differently in the different sections (you mentioned that you squashed it so it worked in the verse). You could automate, or just give it two different tracks. As is it sounds like a recorded band practice (especially her vocal), and adding different effects in different places (ie, adding texture) could make it more like an album cut....like if you have multiple takes of her voice (or was it all tracked live?) you could double her vox in some parts, or use a different take to create a reverb texture. If you end up readjusting the compression, listen to the S's again and consider de-essing or not. They sound a bit sharp in some spots, but it could partly the compression setting. I hesitate to comment on anything else because I'm listening on earbuds. But, yeah, a better band would have resulted in a better recording, but that's always going to be the case. This is a good way to practice your skills for the real world where most bands need some help in the studio. |
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To everyone, all the advice so far is brilliant! Thanks so much!
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| Gear maniac Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Chicago
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Also, don't forget about automating the gain of vocals. Words that are popping out too much get nugged down, words getting swallowed can use a tad boost (if it's a word starting with an "s", you usually don't need to boost the "s"). It may be that you can dip the guitar eq's just a bit in a couple of freq's to make a lilttle more room for her voice, but you'll have to experiment with that. They have a lot of distortion, the effects of which can sometimes be made less drastic by cutting some spots in the high end (4k, 8k for example). If you add harmonies, her voice is already getting pretty abrasive in spots when she gets loud, so I'd definitely have her either sing very softly (in which case she can be closer to the mic, perhaps 6 inches away and a little off-axis) or, if she must sing loudly, get like 3 - 6 feet away. Either way will help so that you don't just have a build-up of the same potentially offending higher frequencies in her voice, and will lend to separation and yet more texture, which is always important. I really believe texture is super important, especially in the digital realm, which means a lot of tiny things adding up to a bigger picture. | |
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| Gear maniac Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Chicago
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| Cool, hopefully some of these suggestions gets you trying some new things that lead to discovering some other new things that will work for you. Regarding the doubler, I'd use that as a send and tweak it separately, maybe even giving it its own reverb or delay. Subtly is often key, like you can't really hear it's there till you remove it. But to each their own, of course. You just want to watch levels and frequency build up as you start adding effects sends (pre or post fader). Too bad you don't have more plugins to work with, but, again, it might just make you work a little harder. |
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![]() Thanks again so much for the advice.
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| Gear nut Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: London
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i am not a competent in this music style but in the bass section is something strange going on. may possible to take some bass from the kick and give it some little boost around 1khz.than it not will be so bumpy and the kick gonna hit better..
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| Gear interested Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: South, UK
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| Great tip, I'll try it out. Agreed, the bass is realy starting to grate on me now, it definitely needs a bit of tweaking. Cheers!
__________________ "To sing you must first open your mouth. You must have a pair of lungs and a little knowledge of music. It is not necessary to have an accordion, or a guitar. The essential thing is that I want to sing. Then this is a song, I'm singing." - H. Miller |
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| Gear interested Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: South, UK
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| Hey guys, Sorry to revive an ancient thread from the dead. Thanks for all your help in the first mix I did of this song, it's been a few months now and I've learned a lot since then, and now I've completed my college course (just finished my BTEC in Music Tech), and I've been working all through this time on the mix for this band. I've attached the latest mix of that particular song. I think due to the amount of time I've spent on it now being not happy with it, I've cooked the mix and now pretty much anything I do with it I'm not happy with! I've done a few other bands since then which I think I've had more successful experiences with, but this mix is still not finished and it seems I can't get it right! So once again if anyone's willing, I could use some fresh pairs of ears on this. What sticks out for me are a) kick is way too loud and sounds 'flabbly'. I couldn't get the natural kick to sound right so the kick on there is two samples (drumagog) blended together, b) vocal is still too dry, tried a few things but wasn't particularly inspired by anything. I've invested in Melodyne since and have tried to autotune the vocals but not sure if this had been as effective as I'd have hoped. Also there's a couple of tracking errors from where my humble PC is battling under the heat of all the plug ins! Again, please be as brutal as you feel necessary, and your honesty is once again appreciated! Cheers, Adam
__________________ "To sing you must first open your mouth. You must have a pair of lungs and a little knowledge of music. It is not necessary to have an accordion, or a guitar. The essential thing is that I want to sing. Then this is a song, I'm singing." - H. Miller |
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| Gear interested Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: South, UK
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Yeah does sound a little crazy at the top end. Thanks for the tips, I'll get straight on to it. ![]()
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| Gear Head Join Date: Jan 2007
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| You've got two guitars, right? To me they sound unbalanced volume wise which detracts from the mid range wall of guitar effect, if ya' know what I mean. I can't hear the kick drum at all, which is killing the songs drive. Also, the bass guitar is really weak, sounds as if there's too much distance on the mic (did you mic it?) To sort out the hi-hats, couldn't you automate the level of the overheads for when they're really intrusive? One last thing, for what's worth, I'd actually bury the vocals a little more, once you've got a solid sonic bed sorted for the track. That's pretty subjective of course, but it sounds as if you're making a feature of her vocals, and they're not worthy of it. Good luck though! |
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| Gear interested Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: South, UK
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Yeah the bass amp was mic'ed. Bad idea. The amp's making this terrible 'fwabawabawaba' noise that just sounds appalling, so I'm trying to mask it as much as I can without losing it completely. Good idea on automating. I'll have a looksee. That kick drum is the bane of my life! I'm trying to get that clicky bass drum that you hear in bands like this today, and it's simply just not cutting through despite all my best efforts! Does anyone have any tips on how I can get that kick cutting through, with that signature 'rock radio band of today' clicky bass drum?
__________________ "To sing you must first open your mouth. You must have a pair of lungs and a little knowledge of music. It is not necessary to have an accordion, or a guitar. The essential thing is that I want to sing. Then this is a song, I'm singing." - H. Miller | |
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| Gear interested Join Date: May 2008
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| 1st of all, their drums aren't "clicky"....they just have alot sharper attack/release which you can get using simple compression. making the kick "clicky" IS the prob bro
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| Gear interested Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: South, UK
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The comments I've had on this are fairly interesting. Something I might try is bouncing down without the iZotope Ozone mastering plugin on. I think the way I've got this set might be what's causing some of the problems.
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| Gear interested Join Date: May 2008
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| well you do want that attack, but remember, you still ultimately are looking for a thicker booming sound on the kick than that which was recorded. This is the painful part for ALL of us working on recording things....that you will learn that first and foremost you MUST have a solid sound on entry (the sound coming through before you press record without ANYTHING else done ie. eq's, comp, etc). Now that that kick is already recorded, you have a few options imo to get a better sound. If you have the drum tracks seperated, which by god I HOPE you havent bussed down yet or youre screwed, go into the kick track and use redrum and find a good kick, just completely wipe this one off and work on small (key word) changes to comp, eq, etc.....you dont ever want to over process it too much, it'll show.
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| Gear interested Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: South, UK
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This has all been routed down to a 'Kick Aux' in PT (but not bussed down). I've got a boost in at 100k, cut at 300k and boost up at 2.5k on a EQ on the insert on the Kick Bus. I've got a TransX in there too on the Mega Kick preset to bring out the low end and RComp is working at 4:1, quick attack, quick release, and threshold of -4.0. I understand the low end is important which is why I've been trying to enhance it all the time, but I'm just making it sound flabby and awful. If you've got any suggestions on where I can go from there, that'd be awesome. Thanks for all the advice so far by the way. As usual, everyones been really helpful.
__________________ "To sing you must first open your mouth. You must have a pair of lungs and a little knowledge of music. It is not necessary to have an accordion, or a guitar. The essential thing is that I want to sing. Then this is a song, I'm singing." - H. Miller | |
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