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Old 26th February 2008, 08:26 PM   #1
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Tell me what you think of this Hip Hop Beat?

Hey there GS, I want so feedback on this beat I made yesterday. It is a soul based sampled beat ala Murs style (9th Wonderish). Tell me what you think, its called Time Goes By.



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Old 26th February 2008, 10:43 PM   #2
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Hey there GS, I want so feedback on this beat I made yesterday. It is a soul based sampled beat ala Murs style (9th Wonderish). Tell me what you think, its called Time Goes By.



MySpace.com - Planet Mars - - Hip Hop - www.myspace.com/planetmarsproductions



Hope you enjoy....
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i like...but i personally would use the main hook (the vocal "ahhh") more sparingly. i like how you switch it up with strings at times, but i wouldn't add more of that either. i would just let the drums ride alone every other bar...otherwise it runs the risk of getting too repetitive.

and i would have fewer dubbed out repeats to start the song. two X repeat seemed about right to me. after that, you're expecting it and you're just sitting around waiting for the beat to kick in.

just one man's view and not meant to detract from a good piece of work.

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Old 28th February 2008, 02:10 AM   #3
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great stUff, thx....
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Old 2nd March 2008, 01:23 PM   #4
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Waow !!!
I Love those type of beats !!!
Sounds realy nice to me !!!
Are you sellin beats ??
Thats exactly what im lookin for !!
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