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22nd February 2008, 07:03 PM
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| Gear interested  Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Woodzisland
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| Hip-Hop track Please give me any & all feedback on this track. What do you think of it lyrically? How is the track? How can I make it better? How it is Myspace.com/oliviermoore |
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22nd February 2008, 08:14 PM
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22nd February 2008, 09:01 PM
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| Yeah I'm Serious... What? Am I in the wrong forum? |
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22nd February 2008, 11:58 PM
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| Lives for gear  Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: The City Of Brotherly Love And Sisterly Affection
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__________________ "The words are great,but I dont like the lyrics"-A&R guy |
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23rd February 2008, 01:06 AM
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| Gear addict  Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Murfreesboro, TN
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| Ouch. Well, I don't understand what this kind of stuff is all about so I don't know if it's good or bad (if I keep my opinion to myself) but sonically I do know it's not good. I hear a lot of this rap stuff posted here that sounds good but i can still only take a few seconds of it at a time. This doesn't sound good, not that you can't learn. If you aren't trying to be a star then just keep plugging and have fun. If you do want to be a star, you'd better hire the recording done by someone with some experience. |
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23rd February 2008, 05:03 AM
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| Gear interested Join Date: Dec 2007
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| everything else aside.. drums aint bangin.. If its hiphop, those drums have to hit you. |
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23rd February 2008, 05:23 AM
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| Gear maniac Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Silver Spring, MD
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23rd February 2008, 10:49 AM
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| Gear interested Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Woodzisland
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| I copped reason 2 weeks ago, this is my first "completed" track... I Know my beat aint shit, Lyrically..... Show me someone better on this forum... |
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23rd February 2008, 10:50 AM
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| "rap stuff" ????? |
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23rd February 2008, 10:58 AM
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Such contradictory statements co-existing but 3 lines from each other.... Thanks 4 the love illy... | |
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23rd February 2008, 07:18 PM
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23rd February 2008, 09:09 PM
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| Gear addict Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Murfreesboro, TN
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Isn't that what is is? Do you call it someting else? Should I call it a "narrative"? I mean, when I hear something with no singing, no instuments or chords changes to speak of, no groove and it sounds like a drumset that has hiccups I thought that was called rap. I guess I am old. I do have another name for it (and it ends with "rap") but I was trying ot keep it focused on the recording. It will get better if you just keep at it. Your playback tools and environment may be lacking. If you are just starting to accumulate equipment, look out. AND you won't be able to AFFORD TO QUIT YOUR DAY JOB!!!! There is always something better to buy. This is GS, after all, and you have come to the right place to learn you need to spend every dime you can to get better stuff!!!! It's a beautiful thing. But if you keep doing what you are doing content-wise it won't help no matter how good the recording and gear is. You probably don't like the kind of stuff I record either so my opinion is just that. Keep it up and keep posting. There are guys here that will love what you do. You just got hold of a couple that don't. Don't feel to bad. You should see what they say about me! | |
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25th February 2008, 08:38 PM
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25th February 2008, 09:12 PM
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| ...im better lyrically |
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26th February 2008, 01:05 PM
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you got me... ...lyrically, not so much... | |
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26th February 2008, 07:13 PM
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| trust me i am WAY more lyrical then your small wordplay and ignorant similes...but what ever.. |
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26th February 2008, 07:46 PM
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| yeah... ...and your flow is hot too |
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26th February 2008, 11:45 PM
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| ^^ thanks |
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