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8th December 2007, 05:56 AM
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| Gear Head Join Date: Oct 2007
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| Pop/Rock Love Song **Update** I've updated a newer version with new vocals and a new mix. Comments? Thanks! ** Pretty shallow lyrics, just fun and frivolously in love type stuff. Please tear it apart and give me your thoughts and constructive critcism/feedback. Thanks! |
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8th December 2007, 11:15 AM
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| Gear nut Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Hamburg, Germany
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1) the vocal rhythm/meter and the melody in the bridge/prechorus isn't very different from the chorus, that kinda makes it harder to set the chorus apart. 2) I'd have stacked about 10 background vocal tracks in the chorus, to make it sound a lot bigger. When you sing "breathing on my skin" in the prechorus, there is a nice backing panned L/R and then you go back to a one voice chorus, which feel anti-climatic to me. 3) I'd play around with little effects on the vocals in the verses just to make it sound more interesting throughout. Good work overall! Hope this helps! | |
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9th December 2007, 01:13 AM
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| Thanks. I agree about the BGV, and I recorded about 20 takes, but wasn't really liking the higher ones. I will play around with that, but I had the very same thought. The same vocals (panned in the pre-c) run throughout the chorus, but I think they're just getting lost in the mix. Definitely something I will tweak before release. Thanks! |
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10th December 2007, 02:02 AM
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| Gear addict  Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Kent, England
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| Vocalist sounds like he has a cold. |
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10th December 2007, 02:44 AM
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| Vocalist had a VERY bad cold. I'm getting over it now. ;) |
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30th January 2008, 01:24 AM
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| Just updated this one (the attachment in the first post is the new one). Comments? Thanks! |
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30th January 2008, 01:34 AM
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| Gear addict Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Kent, England
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| The low end is good. |
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30th January 2008, 01:37 AM
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| No love for the high end? Just kidding! Low end is usually my weak point, so if that's better, then thank you! |
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30th January 2008, 01:42 AM
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| Gear addict Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Kent, England
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30th January 2008, 01:57 AM
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| Oh I see, cool. Well thanks for that comment, because the low end is what I've been trying to get better at. Thanks! |
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