latest song: "Rebound Girl" (Powerpop)

gotpop · 24th November 2007, 05:23 AM

Hey,

I've been slowly working on songs for a debut EP, and I've recently put the first completed song up on my myspace page. MySpace.com - Steven LeBeau - PALO ALTO, California - Rock / Powerpop / Alternative - www.myspace.com/gotpop

The song, "Rebound Girl", was actually mostly recorded by Justin Phelps at Tiny Telephone (guitars, bass, drums, bvox, all performed by me), and I did the lead vocals and synth stuff (as well editing and mixing) at home in Logic.

I'd love to find out whether you think a) the mix sounds "finished" (and hopefully "professional"), and b) should I keep refining it.

Also, I'll take any other criticisms/advice/ideas.

Enjoy!

-Steven

gotpop · 30th November 2007, 12:44 AM

Wow. Nobody?

camerondye · 30th November 2007, 03:02 AM

I think it sounds like a good mix except I feel the bass is too loud and I'm a bass player. Good Luck...
cam

RinnyTin · 30th November 2007, 10:41 PM

I think it sounds pretty good, the vocal sound needs some work it doesn't make me want to listen to it, other things in the mix are more exciting.

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24th November 2007, 05:23 AM	#1
gotpop Gear interested Join Date: May 2007 Location: Woodside, Ca Posts: 4	latest song: "Rebound Girl" (Powerpop) Hey, I've been slowly working on songs for a debut EP, and I've recently put the first completed song up on my myspace page. MySpace.com - Steven LeBeau - PALO ALTO, California - Rock / Powerpop / Alternative - www.myspace.com/gotpop The song, "Rebound Girl", was actually mostly recorded by Justin Phelps at Tiny Telephone (guitars, bass, drums, bvox, all performed by me), and I did the lead vocals and synth stuff (as well editing and mixing) at home in Logic. I'd love to find out whether you think a) the mix sounds "finished" (and hopefully "professional"), and b) should I keep refining it. Also, I'll take any other criticisms/advice/ideas. Enjoy! -Steven

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30th November 2007, 12:44 AM	#2
gotpop Gear interested Join Date: May 2007 Location: Woodside, Ca Posts: 4	Wow. Nobody?

30th November 2007, 03:02 AM	#3
camerondye Lives for gear Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Durham, NC Posts: 681	I think it sounds like a good mix except I feel the bass is too loud and I'm a bass player. Good Luck... cam

30th November 2007, 10:41 PM	#4
RinnyTin Gear maniac Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 157	I think it sounds pretty good, the vocal sound needs some work it doesn't make me want to listen to it, other things in the mix are more exciting.