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Old 30th August 2007, 12:00 AM   #1
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Please help some feedback needed

Hi there, I would be wery glad if you could give me some feedback on the sound, how the number is envolving as it´s not finished yet. I´m getting a bit stuck in how to continue. The second verse is boring in it´s form and there needs to be added some more vocals maybe continue the chorus without the guitars. Any adwise also on the mixing would be of great help as I´m pretty new in the field of recording. regen.wma
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Old 30th August 2007, 01:22 AM   #2
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Hey there....

it's some kind of minimalistic isn't it???

I think when the guitar bounce in the first time, they are way to loud......the second time it's better.....

The beginning could be a bit shorter........ I mean it's 30 sec until the song really goes on........

Maybe try to keep on instrument in there......it's changing every now and then....

I like the feeling of the song.....I'd imagine a guy at night staring at big city while it's raining.....and he's felling really depressed......

Different, but nice work

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Old 30th August 2007, 10:19 AM   #3
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Thanks alot for the respons florian,
he he actually the name on the song startet out to be regn which is the same as rain in english and I was inspired by this intense july rainy weather but as I remember I was not depressed or was I ;)
I had thought about starting the first chorus with one guitar instead of two that might take the volume a bit down and I´ll try to think about shortening the intro down somehow and see what happens.
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Old 31st August 2007, 01:05 AM   #4
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