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Old 13th January 2007, 05:27 PM   #1
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Super Produced Pop Tune

I engineerd, mixed, and produced this 70 some odd track beast.

Whacha think?

They are being shopped pretty heavily so I am doing my best to get to do the release record when it happens....hope this gets my name in the hat. The band dug it and we are doing 6 more together with me at the helm, so at least I have their vote.
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Old 13th January 2007, 08:11 PM   #2
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It sounds good.

I'm not a huge fan of the guitars however, they sound thin to me, during the chorus they're ok but I find the intro/verse a little shocking.
The beginning of the song is kinda weak, when the drums come in that is, it doesn't explode like you expect it to... maybe an extra power chord in there could be cool, just to get the song started...

The kick drum is too loud for my tastes, or maybe a little too clicky for the style I don't know, I like the snare but the kick bothers me, even the tone of it, sounds muddy ( is it triggered? If it is I don't like the sample too much).

But overall it's a good mix, I think working on these few things could make it better though but maybe that's just me.

Nice work
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Old 13th January 2007, 11:13 PM   #3
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I agree.

The kick is way too loud. You could give the kick a little more bass and then lower the volume. The guitars are very thin and need to be alot louder and cut more through. The snare sounds very good.

One thing I think you could improve a little bit is the subbass in the overall sound. It needs a little deeper bass. Not too much but there's just a little lack of punch.

Otherwise, it sounds very well!
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Old 14th January 2007, 09:21 AM   #4
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Your mix sounds good.
(I agree about the kick and guitars).

Are you still using the Equinox ? Which output transformer ?

I don't know if it is the Equinox, but you got a big, wide sound.
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Old 14th January 2007, 05:13 PM   #5
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Yea this was the first mix so I am going to make a few slight changes after hearing the bands feedback as well. I will post when I get it done.

It is the Nickel setting on the Equinox. I may try a few different mixes on each setting.

Thanks for the input so far.
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Old 14th January 2007, 05:33 PM   #6
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Sounds GREAT

that songs has something. it shines as it is, my ears would like to hear it in the " maroon 5 " way, all a lil closer, drums a lil more down and the vocals more solid.
but thats just my thought of how this song could turn into something even BIGGER.

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Old 14th January 2007, 05:51 PM   #7
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Old 14th January 2007, 07:44 PM   #8
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Cool PigPen!
My modest suggestion:
The Guit at the beggining sounds thin , too far and distant.
The toms have to be fatter esoecially at the very beggining !!

I would add a bit of low end to the BD and lowered the volume a bit.
I would add more Bass...and better relation with the BD.

I thing the Guitars can be much louder, fatter , a bit less bright and less distant .
I think you can change the importance(change balance) of the Gtrs to create more of a chage in the parts of the song.

Lowered the high at the Hihat..are a bit bright and the tone goes beyond the overall tone of your mix,,,just a tiny bit less.

Snare, vocals and emotion is great! I think that is the hardest part and you nail it!

basicly the song sound great and the vocals and drums are cool and i think needs more interaction and integration of the GTrs and Bass on the mix!
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Old 15th January 2007, 06:23 PM   #9
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Thanks for all the replies!

This should be fun to hear your opinions....
There were a few other little changes the band wanted to make so it is a bit different, but I believe better.

Mix 1 is the remix through the Iron mode
Mix 2 is Nickel
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Hey PigPen! that is so cool!
Sounds much better!
I personally prefer the mix and SOUND on the Iron mode!! I think is bterr the glue there than with the Nickel.

I think in the nickel the Kick is louder and maybe the sound of nickel is a bit cleaner than the iron?

also was the exact same mix just through different mode?
please can you explain me the different modes and what each of them supposed to sounds like?
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Old 15th January 2007, 09:08 PM   #11
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Thanks man...yea exact same mix.

The Iron is the thick Neve-esque type thing. The bottom can get a bit crazy if you don't mix into it, but sounds good as long as you know what you are getting into. Probably my favorite now that I have gotten more used to it.
The Nickel is the cleanest by far to my ears.
The Steel has a mid push (suupposed to be API style). I did not like it for this style at all, but sounds good on other styles.

The proof is here on the Equinox as far as its ability to drastically change the sound of any song with the flick of a switch. I get a fair amount of people pm'ing me on here and calling which I don't mind at all, but here is something you guys can actually hear so my explanantions make more sense. Enjoy!
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That is cool! I think is a great thread!!

cool that io hear the Equinox as you see it!!

I like the warmth of the Iron!!

Thanka Bro!!! you rule!!!
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Old 15th January 2007, 09:28 PM   #13
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Did you remix it through the Iron or Nickel mode ?

What gear did you use for this mix ?


I prefer Iron, the guitar sounds better now, I am not too fond of the kick.
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Old 15th January 2007, 09:38 PM   #14
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I remixed thru the Nickel and got lucky that it worked in Iron

Kick wise, I am trying to give this thing some thump for the clubs as well. Just trying something out of the ordinary for me with this kick trying to have something drive the song....I dig it personally, maybe a little over the top, but for some reason it works for me on this tune....the band may feel differently, we'll see.

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Oh and FWIW, I definitely dig the Iron mode best for this tune now as well....again we'll see what the band/management prefers. My original mix was thru Nickel as well. At first I did not like what Iron was doing to the lows, but now as I said, I dig it.
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the drum:rest of instruments ratio is a little off...other wise this sounds up there with the rest of the chart toppers :)
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Thanks man...yea exact same mix.

The Iron is the thick Neve-esque type thing. The bottom can get a bit crazy if you don't mix into it, but sounds good as long as you know what you are getting into.
Also helps when you can hear it also!!


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Also helps when you can hear it also!!


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Old 16th January 2007, 06:18 PM   #19
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PigPen! I have a friend that works at Henson studios in LA(A&M) for many years , he is an engineer and worked in so many cool albums,,,well they have all the vintage gear you can imagine!! just impressive!

He was looking to buy a 2 bus comp for his studio: and told me that he compared the SSL Xlogic compressor with many great vintage and awesome 2 bus comps.... and he said that the XLogic sounded as goos as the grey faced!just a bit more transparent.
What do u know about it?
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Old 16th January 2007, 06:55 PM   #20
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No idea, I am graced with the ol grey face. After talking with a few esteemed members here, I decided to hold out until I got one so I did.
thethrillfactor has had alot to say about the differences. Maybe search it and look for his name, quite knowledable that guy!
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Old 17th January 2007, 03:22 PM   #21
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Amazing how a few mix changes can make me go from not liking a tune to actually liking the tune... Nice job.

My only suggestion... The guitar solo sounds (for lack of a better term) really PODish to me... Maybe that's a good thing, I don't know. You might slap some delay on it to soften it up and spread it out?
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Yea it is going to see 2 more little bitty changes then off it goes....the solo will soften as suggested a bit and I am going to pull the end counter vocals back down a touch.

Then done I say.

FWIW, I did score 6 more tunes on their record due to this one!
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Old 17th January 2007, 03:42 PM   #23
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dont get me wrong, but to me it still sounds like the drums are upfront and the band is playing somewhere behind the drums ( levelwise ). the drum sound very solid that way but the rest is kinda washy ? ( sounds like a lot of para comp on the drum bus especially when the ride jumps in it sounds like a super short release on it ... which makes it a lil to agressive ? )

just my 2 cents while listening, i still LIKE it
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Old 17th January 2007, 03:51 PM   #24
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When I remix I will give it another listen to see if I can hear what you are saying. The drum comp is the Portico, but I am barely touching it so I am not sure that that is what is causing what you are hearing....When I post the remix, let me know if you still hear it.
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Well besides of the different preferences and taste that we have on mixing I think this thread was one of the best!
I also like it because I know how serious and professional is PigPen about music.

I also think is great how he shows the differences between the Equinox modes and of course how he take the GS opinions!!

Thanks bro!!
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Old 17th January 2007, 10:00 PM   #26
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Thanks dood, that means alot to me.
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