Hi Adam, I am currently making my own 5 metal songs, more along the lines of avenged or trivium. This is totally constructive criticism, I really like the song!
Are the drums programmed?
The kick is very clicky... too much even for metal I think.
The snare has no punch or definition.
The vocals are too loud (or everything else is too quiet lol)
The guitars aren't in your face.
The cymbals are kind of harsh and some levels are off a bit.
The vocals in the beginning are way to loud.
I can't really hear any bass if there is any and if there is, there is no definition.