Fallen - Acoustic Guitar and Vocals

vk all day · 11th September 2006

Hello. I'm looking for some feedback on the recording quality of this song. It's not mastered yet and I didn't add compression or limiiting. Any comments from anyone would be good.

Andreas G · 11th September 2006

Hi,
the recording quality is fine! But I'd work a bit more on your vocal performance. From a technical side, watch out for your intonation, from the emotional side... well, your're fallen because you lost her. How do you feel, the greatest women ever who crossed your live, you love her like no one before! And then... she leaves you for any reason you still don't get it, your are like in trance...

Now listen again to your vocals, is this the adequate performance to this situation? Is that how you wanna show the people your emotions?

Just a thought

Andreas

vk all day · 12th September 2006

Andreas, thanks for the reply. Now I'm really glad I posted this. I thought the vocal was a bit off, especially near the end. I'm not sure why that is. I'm pretty certain I can hit the notes correctly when playing. I'm going to redo it and if it's bad then i'm going to go take some singing lessons, which probably wouldn't hurt either way.

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11th September 2006	#2
Andreas G Lives for gear Joined: Mar 2005 Location: Germany Posts: 1,096	Hi, the recording quality is fine! But I'd work a bit more on your vocal performance. From a technical side, watch out for your intonation, from the emotional side... well, your're fallen because you lost her. How do you feel, the greatest women ever who crossed your live, you love her like no one before! And then... she leaves you for any reason you still don't get it, your are like in trance... Now listen again to your vocals, is this the adequate performance to this situation? Is that how you wanna show the people your emotions? Just a thought Andreas

12th September 2006	#3
vk all day Gear Head Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 52 Thread Starter	Andreas, thanks for the reply. Now I'm really glad I posted this. I thought the vocal was a bit off, especially near the end. I'm not sure why that is. I'm pretty certain I can hit the notes correctly when playing. I'm going to redo it and if it's bad then i'm going to go take some singing lessons, which probably wouldn't hurt either way.