dude. i'm gonna be very honest with u, please do not get offended
i'm persian, and this song has no persian influence in it at all.
it has some indian flavor cuz of the tablas which is an indian insturment (and she is gonna hate it for that) and the use of the sitar
(which is again an indian insturment but sounds very similar to a persian insturment called santur) are so not middle eastern, it's pure western. same as the use of violon
and honestly after a minute it gets pretty boring and i can't imagine any persian girl to have any vibe with this kind of song..
for the use of sitar
i could recommend you to listen to this song: Mohsen Chavoshi,Ali Santoori - Sange Saboor - YouTube
use of the violon i could recommend you this song: bijan mortazavi the best violin player of world best violin player - YouTube
and this: Bijan Mortazavi Rangin Kaman - YouTube
wait till 00.40 till the violon comes in
and as for as love songs, these two are pretty touching to persian people: Shahram Solati - Hasoudi OFFICIAL VIDEO HD - YouTube
which plays a great violon in it
and this: Siavash Ghomayshi - Alaki - YouTube
and for the drums, please get rid of the tablas and those percussion, as if you hear to any of the examples i gave you, the drums are pretty much the only elements that stay westernized....
and the last but not least, what a persian girl would love to hear is none of the above...
it's something like this: Sami Beigi - Ahang e To | Music Video | Bia2.com