Sounds big, lots of air in the upper freq. Nice snare and kick, crispy guitars. The guitar tracks sounds like they are pretty mutch centered, there is the kick snare and bass. I would have full pan on the guitars. One to the left and one to the right. That would open up the center section more and add more stereo. I have kids playing computer games etc just next to me so maybe I heard it wrong. This you know, but Iam saying it anyway. Dont use the same guitar rig and guitar playin-style for the two tracks.
I would like to hear a brake or something within the clip. The mix when theres´a break is importent. If there is any ofcourse