Just posting an updated version with bass by the very helpful/awesome bassist Dan Hawkins Dan Hawkins Bass Player - Home
I could have attempted to play the bass myself but don't really consider myself to be a strong enough bass player for recording purposes - at least definitely not as inventive as Dan. I also figure that the cost of having a pro playing the bass is really insignificant considering that it really raises the potential of the song and gives me one less aspect of the performance to be self concious of.
I am going to be recording vocals tomorrow, so I hope to have this song finished up at some point next week.
I am still after someone to add a fairly subtle keyboard part - if you think you could provide this service or could recommend someone please send me a PM and I'll provide more details.