I like it. The vocals need eqing during verses, can't make them out at all, also I think the levels of the bass in the chorus @ 0:42 is slightly too loud and the guitar is a bit lost.
Maybe the boom smack drums are a bit lost under the VERY heavy bass too.
This is a really cool song and vibe.
It could do with being mixed better though, nothing ridiculous - keep the vibe just tidy it up. The bass is very over powering at times.
The vocal @3:18 are better sounding.
Not keen on the dry as hell ending, try a tape stop type ending - it would suit it better.