Rip this metal mix a new one!

[Voodoochild777]

Hey guys!

I have been learning and recording for a few years now and would like some constructive advise on my first track.

This track has no vocals yet or solos but I want you guys to give me the heads up on whether u think I am heading in the correct direction or not? There are things I have noticed that I want to change and I like others will probably never be 100% happy with my mix but constructive criticism I find vital for improvement.

I would love u guys to cast your ears over all of it and mabe let me know if you just simply weather u dig it?

From what I have read I know u guys know your shit.

Ready to rip it apart... but be nice.

I very much appreciate your help on this and I apologise if I have not followed any rules as posting is new to me. Cheers.

http://soundcloud.com/theinferno777/tempting-the-will