I like it. It's hard to comment too much on the mix on the crap speakers back here in the bedroom. It sounds like it's not quite there in parts, and other parts are sounding quite nice, like the intro and the more vocal breakdown parts, at least on these speakers. The vocal might be a bit over sibilant in a couple parts, but these speakers emphasize that a lot anyway.
The song itself is nice. It's a good vibe, whimsical and melodic. Definitely keep on it and take it all the way since it's worth putting in the time I think.
BTW, the official spelling is "Whatchu thank?" Gotta pay attention to the details!
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