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Old 16th December 2005   #1
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new rap track finished need pro advise

I just finished this beat but feel that any advise or critisism would help a lot!
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My first reply for myself is to learn how to spell "advice"!!
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hi

sounds good, but still $digital$, what stuff u are using?
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I like where it's going.

I think it could drop down a little more during the verse. It dosen't change enough between mix and chorus.

Also, the mix isn't right, but I'm assuming it's not a final mix.
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Ya..I haven't mixed it at all. I also agree with you but I was debating on either building the hook up more so there is a large change or just taking out some stuff in the verse? Still can't decide.
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Take some out of the verse.

gotta leave room for the vox.

Chop up that synth line a bit. It's too busy.
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l like it

50 cent - outta control (dre/elizondo) is what you were going for...right?
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see what it sounds like when you take out the hihat, or just put a closed hihat on the up beats. or at the very least, change the hihat sound to something much tighter and shorter---
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^^^

I was thinking the same thing. I might just go do that right now actually!
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