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26th May 2010
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| Gear Head Joined: Oct 2008 Location: Orlando, FL
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Thread Starter | "Tween" Pop song
Check out this song I wrote to shop in the "tween" girl pop market. Let me know what you think. Thanks! -Beaumaloe |
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26th May 2010
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| Gear maniac Joined: May 2009
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Nice toon Beau, very catchy.
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26th May 2010
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| Gear nut Joined: Dec 2009 Location: Bakersfield, CA
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Really Catchy song and definitely in the tweeny girl market. Regardless it's a good song. thumbsup
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26th May 2010
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Very catch! Sounds great too. It sounds like something you'd hear in a department store. (Which in this case is a good thing  )
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27th May 2010
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I think you are probably right on target there, dude. It's super-catchy, and would work perfectly for the next Miley I would think.
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27th May 2010
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| Gear Head Joined: Oct 2008 Location: Orlando, FL
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You guys are too kind! Thanks a lot. -Beaumaloe |
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27th May 2010
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| Gear maniac Joined: Nov 2008
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super spot on. well done!! Now ,SHOP!! |
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27th May 2010
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| Lives for gear  Joined: Jan 2010 Location: Great lakes State, U.S.A.
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Ready To Go! Great production sound. Can tell the vocalist has "more in store".  |
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28th May 2010
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| Gear Head Joined: May 2010 Location: United Kingdom, Manchester.
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I really really love what you did with the guitars in terms of the layering going on during the chorus. Maybe the one thing I could recommend is add some low cut to the vocals, vocals don't need that muddy low end- especially hers. This is a great song overall, good job. |
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28th May 2010
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| Gear nut  Joined: Mar 2007 Location: north and south
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i think vocals are a bit loud, something is making the chorus seem too busy. beef up the bass a bit. other than this, nice going!
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