WIP - Raise a Toast

[Jor]

Here is a song that my roommate wrote and I recorded and did a semi-final mix of. It is called Raise a Toast.

I'm concerned with how the audio of the drums are fitting in. I think they sound pretty good, but I'm sure someone could see something in them that could be improved.
Do keep in mind that there are obvious mess ups in some areas and I'm aware of it.

[Jor]

Here is an update, much more coherent