"I saw die" looking for harmony critiques

Ron Vogel · 30th December 2009

It's a work in-progess. Sorry about the distortion (It's from a quickie master).

I'm still working on the vocals, then I'll do a focused mix.

As you an tell, I'm experimenting with different vocal production techniques. So, curious about thoughts on how it's coming along.
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Ron Vogel · 31st December 2009

Fixed the distortion, mix is pretty clear so far...still looking for opinions!

Ron Vogel · 2nd January 2010

anybody???

Ron Vogel · 5th January 2010

Hard to get any love around here!

ed littman · 5th January 2010

Cool song.
I like the tone of the bass. nice & round & fat....just to much. Takes alot of the energy away from the other elements. Kick gets lost down there. Organ/power chords seem a bit thin, & cymbals are thin & harsh. This could be to cut through the big ass bass.
Fix the bass & warm up the rest.
I Hope this helps,
Ed

I re read your thread title. Sorry if this was not what you were looking for.

30th December 2009	#1
Ron Vogel Lives for gear Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Bolingbrook, IL Posts: 1,340 Thread Starter	"I saw die" looking for harmony critiques It's a work in-progess. Sorry about the distortion (It's from a quickie master). I'm still working on the vocals, then I'll do a focused mix. As you an tell, I'm experimenting with different vocal production techniques. So, curious about thoughts on how it's coming along. Start Player __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...&content=music http://www.myspace.com/ronvogelronvogel http://www.gimmesound.com/RonVogel/

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ed littman Gear addict Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: North Haledon NJ Posts: 449	Cool song. I like the tone of the bass. nice & round & fat....just to much. Takes alot of the energy away from the other elements. Kick gets lost down there. Organ/power chords seem a bit thin, & cymbals are thin & harsh. This could be to cut through the big ass bass. Fix the bass & warm up the rest. I Hope this helps, Ed I re read your thread title. Sorry if this was not what you were looking for. __________________ Analog/Digital Mastering/Editing http://www.EdLittmanMastering.com 201-824-7860 Last edited by ed littman; 5th January 2010 at 04:36 AM.. Reason: Just Noticed the title of your thread

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31st December 2009	#2
Ron Vogel Lives for gear Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Bolingbrook, IL Posts: 1,340 Thread Starter	Fixed the distortion, mix is pretty clear so far...still looking for opinions!

2nd January 2010	#3
Ron Vogel Lives for gear Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Bolingbrook, IL Posts: 1,340 Thread Starter	anybody???