I need some feedback on this rock mix

[Ddjembe Mutombo]

I am mixing my group's demos. This is a 1:30 snippet that i bounced for you guys to critique. Let me know what you think. Tear it apart. Tell me everything that sucks about it.

The only thing I caught was there needs to be slightly more verb on the vocals, but I have an electrical engineering exam to study for so I don't have time to fix it now.

Thanks in advance.

[lettenmusic]

mix sounds bright and shallow...sorry I don't have much too say otherwise.

[Ddjembe Mutombo]

i know what you mean. I think it is EQ i dropped on the master. I cut certain notes to keep the bass from booming so much. I think i will just do that to the bass track individually for future versions of this mix.

[nigel_g]

Nice man, I like it. It definitely is a little too bright as it is. Could hit a little harder I think.

The vocal note at 0:32 sounds a little flat.. melodyne that!

I like the song!

[Ddjembe Mutombo]

are you talking about the highest note of the "to pull through"? I think I hear it. Yeah. mix is way bright and thin. I need to fix that master EQ i did so it doesn't suck so much life out of the song.

I plan on mixing the rest of the song after my engineering exam tomorrow. I will post it here when I bounce it.