Just in search of some general advice

[fufunono]

Hey everyone! i've been lurking these forums for quite some time and just now got the whim to throw something up for you guys to tear apart. (constructively of course = p). Well anywho, here it is. This isn't meant to be a serious recording by any means, just something I slapped together to try and get a better feel of the entire recording/mixing process. My knowledge of mixing/recording only encompasses what ive learned through word of mouth/reading great forum posts. Any and all critique is welcome, point me in the right direction guys.
The drums are really poorly programmed but it's the best I can do at the moment with the scope of my knowledge. Guitars sound pretty good I hope. And there is of course, no bass or vocals minus the 3 second vocal part where I decided I had to let out a yelp of pain. (OW!).Hope you guys enjoy it~!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3213119/owne...shhighpass.mp3

[fufunono]

anyone? = /